Recount writing

This is a screenshot of my results in our end of Term 4 recount writing test.

My teachers have worked out my average score for writing and I am at 2A.

This is below the National Standard for my year level.

I am doing great at my sentences.

I  need to work harder at my punctuation for next year.

Raw meat Ewwwwww....!

Kia ora

This week `we did an experiment about raw meat some people got Lamb kidneys and some people got Lamb hearts which my group got. The reason we did this was because we went to the life education A.K.A Harold they taught us about the human body that is why we did this.