Writing Term One Name:_____Cyrus________
Persuasive Writing
Prompt: Is it wrong to fight?
We are learning to: tell my opinion and write my opinion
Brainstorm ideas: It’s wrong to fight
Firstly,secondly,thirdly
Onomatopoeia
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In my belief I think it’s wrong to fight
Firstly you could hurt someone and make them feel sad.
Secondly they could hurt you back and start a huge and everyone will get in trouble.
Thirdly you could hurt someone so much that Bang! They could be dead in just 5 seconds.
So I believe it’s wrong to fight because if you hurt them what if you were them would you like it if that was you?
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Kia ora Cyrus, I have enjoyed reading your opinion about fighting and must say that I agree with you.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your warm welcome this morning during the powhiri. I was most impressed by your Haka.
Well done
Mrs Burt
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