KIA Ora today we are doing a 5 senses writing but we only had to do three mine were Smell, Touch and sight hope you like it please check out my friends blog there names are T.A, Toby Jayden, Rico and Max.
The abandoned house.
A dirty smell is smacking my nose. I walk closer to the door.Walls are breaking down and the roof is disintegrating into dust. I accidentally step on a fallen glass and it cracks loudly.
Kia ora Cyrus,
ReplyDeleteGreat use of personification there in your opening sentence. Your descriptions make it easy for me to imagine what it would be like. Eerie!!
Miss M